The prompt today at dversepoets.com is Monsters.
I didn't write this for the prompt but in reading it, if someone I knew was being treated this way, the person doing it in my opinion would be a monster.
Sometimes the monster is us....
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You know who she is
I didn't write this for the prompt but in reading it, if someone I knew was being treated this way, the person doing it in my opinion would be a monster.
Sometimes the monster is us....
~
You know who she is
yet constantly
forget her name.
You’ve seen
her from the inside
but forget the
shape of her face.
You know she
dreams with a tender heart
yet you
chastise her when she cries.
You know that
she is afraid of the dark
yet you walk
around turning out lights.
You know she
has a song to sing
but you hate
the sound of her voice.
You know she
is trying to find herself
yet you never
let her feel at home.
You truly
believe she is beautiful
yet continue
to hide her away.
You know that
she cries alone at night
and you
continue closing doors.
You know that
her heart has been broken
yet you tell
her she has to be strong.
You know that
she just wants someone to hold her
but you insure
she is always alone.
You saw her
look in the mirror, unsure
so you simply
took it away.
You put
pictures up on all of the walls
and gave her
illusions instead.
You know she
is lost and fighting right now
yet you
selfishly keep her numb.
You saw her on
her path to strength
and you turned
the roadside sign.
You know she dreams
of falling in love
but you tell
her that she is a fool.
You know she
just wants someone to hear her
yet you only
allow whispered words.
You know that
when scared she runs far and fast
so you trained
her for the race.
You know she
just wanted you to help her heal
but you looked
the other way.
You know her,
YOU KNOW HER! So why?
Do you treat
her like a stranger?
You know her,
YOU ARE HER! So why?
Do you do
these things to yourself?
mmm...yeah, i know a few....and they eat themselves up with it too...its so easy to do...hard to label them a monster when they have been taught it...we are not born hating ourselves you know...
ReplyDeleteI am sorry, but I can't pick out the first part of your poem from the background ~ I like what I can read though ...
ReplyDeleteSelf-loathing is a monster. This fits nicely with the prompt.
ReplyDeleteThat's a good question. We are hardest on ourselves.
ReplyDeleteA twist on the ending ~ We are too hard on ourselves, too unforgiving that in the end, we destroy ourselves ~ Good one ~
ReplyDeleteVery good take on the prompt...how terrible we are to ourselves, and boy that can be one big monster to conquer.
ReplyDeleteThis was a fine write and a brave one. (I like REAL.) Sometimes the monster is us...or within us. My poem had that theme too. Sad sometimes when a person doesn't treat themselves as kindly as they would treat another, isn't it? The ending definitely took my breath away!
ReplyDeleteThis rang a bell with me...the monster within us all ;) Great style here.
ReplyDeleteThis is painfully true~many of us are hardest on ourselves. I like how you saved the theme for the end. The build up made it very powerful!
ReplyDeleteYes, there are many kinds of monsters, and it is all too true that too often we are our own worst critic. Excellent take on the prompt and a very nice write!
ReplyDeleteThis really is all of us. Great job on this prompt.
ReplyDeleteVery vivid depiction....
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