For dversepoets.com
The prompt Meeting the Bar: Graffiti Poetry
asked us to write a poem influenced by the aesthetic or purposes of graffiti.
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Tangible evidence, visible
scars
we need them for validation.
Word written on stone, inked
etched into skin
traces that we have been here,
existed.
You see it more in big cities
where the nameless and the
faceless run rampant.
Where people move daily through
the motion of life
and pass the wandering and lost
without recognition.
In small towns, it’s more of an
anomaly
and by definition does not fit
in.
It is the thing that does not
belong
in this warm quiet place.
I lived in a small town where
space was provided
a stone wall and chalk for you
to leave your trace.
“We want you to matter here”
was the message
“but don’t mess up the
aesthetic of our precious little façade”.
I like it better when it’s
taken, stolen
proof of life that had to be
taken at some risk.
The image of some rogue artist
or aching soul
seeking out a blank canvas
where it was never intended to be.
There it becomes primal, raw,
something fought for yet owned
by no one.
Once scrawled on a wall it is
simply left
something once held within that
had to be set free.
In being consumed by the
passing eye
life is sustained as it seeps
into another’s consciousness.
proof of life that had to be taken at some risk...nice..it is more primal and more raw when something is at stake and you are unwilling to let something stop you....
ReplyDeleteIndeed...graffiti whether folks like it or not does tend to seep into one's consciousness.
ReplyDeleteyeah...it's interesting that where the anonymity increases, the people want to be heard and seen more.. in a little village you may worry that people watch too much what you're doing...ha...my mom grew up in one and felt she has to escape to a city..she did no graffiti though...smiles
ReplyDelete"something once held within that had to be set free"
ReplyDeleteI love that line - it really resonates with me.
true that it strikes more of a chord because it is illicit or unplanned...spontaneous writing 'recognized'...I think that is the main idea..to get recognition/validation..
ReplyDeleteI like this - tis true we need to leave a trace of who we are somewhere...
ReplyDeleteAnna :o]
A wonderful exploration, I loved you used proof of life and the contrasts between the city and small town.
ReplyDeleteI love the contrast between the city and small town graffiti too. and that last line is killer!
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