Sunday, November 24, 2013

Without question


Intent without question

 

you make me ache

 

Crafted care

 

diligence to result

 

A fine specimen of woman

 

chiseled and making me hard

 

 I want with a fierce desire

 

I want without guilt or shame

 

I know it might seem shallow

 

but you know the depth of the ache

 

You feed me pieces, traces

 

knowing the fire that stirs

 

For that I thank you

 

and in reverence

 

I rise

 

with a need that must be heard~
 
 
~for my muse~

1 comment:

  1. "I know it might seem shallow" seems like a moment's hesitation that undermines the boldness of the speaker's proclamation. The speaker is all of a sudden vulnerable and soft and it makes the poem all the more appealing.

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