I
have always ‘seen’ things, ‘felt’ things, ‘known’ things. I see them in the
trees as dusk settles on the day. I see them in flashes as I turn my head. I
hear voices that wake me from sleep. I spend a lot of time lying awake at night
as some thing, some unknown presence needs me to know it is there. I have to
turn on lights, most of the time, as for some reason, that presence does not
seem to comfort me.
One
particular night, I was deep in sleep, when my doorbell rang. It was late,
middle of the night, and scared me as I had recently moved and didn’t know
anyone here. I went downstairs and looked through the peephole in my door. I
saw the shadow of a blonde woman, head tipped forward. She looked remarkably
like someone I know but it was an impossibility that she would be standing
there. I yelled out, “who is it?”. No answer. I asked again. Still nothing. I
moved to the window, and saw no one. I went back to the door and threw it open.
No one was there.
shadows love to tease
spring night becomes cold
and then still again
*written for dversepoets.com
Haibun Monday - The Shadow Knows
Scary read but the haiku is lovely. And yes, shadows do love to tease! I like this take on the prompt.
ReplyDeleteSpooky
ReplyDeleteLove this real creepy story -- I've many myself. (see this Indonesian Rapist Ghost one, if you wish).
ReplyDeleteBTW, was the 5-5-5 break from 5-7-5, intentional?
Cool choice of wording and framing!
Oh, here is the link -- because your blog does not reveal links:
ReplyDeletehttps://triangulations.wordpress.com/2009/04/28/ghost-1-indonesia-rapist/
Spooky but enjoyable, at least for the reader, experience with a good build up in the first paragraph.
ReplyDeleteThere are those that can travel the unseen. Twas only a friendly specter practicing Ecankar.
ReplyDeletethis was a mystical ride along the rivers of a subconscious stream, weaving gently to a muddy banks of dreams. loved the way you spun the haibun's web around each word and ending with a playful haiku
ReplyDeleteIsn't it odd, peculiar in fact. that the stories that are true and the scariest~indeed?
ReplyDeleteThis is a wonderful ghost story, or maibe imagination
ReplyDeleteScary...really. ..I hope it is imagination. ...loved the Haiku!
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