tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2603588489333151910.post8433488863319893410..comments2023-03-30T05:13:08.008-07:00Comments on Lines on a page...: The regret (of temptation)aka_andreahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15388010898688586760noreply@blogger.comBlogger8125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2603588489333151910.post-4009012925030547592013-05-12T23:05:23.635-07:002013-05-12T23:05:23.635-07:00its tough when the scales don't balance and te...its tough when the scales don't balance and temptations such could be dangerous!Akilahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10367262521387980950noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2603588489333151910.post-12277308682978174722013-05-12T16:28:48.017-07:002013-05-12T16:28:48.017-07:00Oh, you quite caught me up in all this and didn...Oh, you quite caught me up in all this and didn't let me go until the end - just like the experience the poem describes.Rosemary Nissen-Wadehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05913841031559499568noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2603588489333151910.post-54866474535232986602013-05-12T06:41:38.364-07:002013-05-12T06:41:38.364-07:00I like the allure and heat in the first part ~ Bu...I like the allure and heat in the first part ~ But then it quickly dissipates in the face of addiction then the regrets following such an encounter ~ Very well portrayed here ~Gracehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02213172239590722747noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2603588489333151910.post-50764038938270286082013-05-12T05:18:49.790-07:002013-05-12T05:18:49.790-07:00You have written this temptation so very well..a k...You have written this temptation so very well..a kind of addiction hard to resist, not resisted, but regret following the next day, and the cycle repeats. Some cycles are hard to break, especially when part of the cycle brings a kind of pleasure for a moment.Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2603588489333151910.post-72165494717090569312013-05-12T04:12:24.965-07:002013-05-12T04:12:24.965-07:00what a chilling end...it settling on yo like a ski...what a chilling end...it settling on yo like a skin...i like that as you will wear it around and feel its pinch on you...you def got right to this one....Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2603588489333151910.post-85338656902475969372013-05-12T03:36:27.577-07:002013-05-12T03:36:27.577-07:00Such a tough type of experience - so very well co...Such a tough type of experience - so very well conveyed here - the end is especially powerful with the regret felt like skin - the regret replacing the longing. And the inherent cruelty and almost attraction to ti - not to the cruelty - but to the hope that it will be different this time - is so very human. Well done. k. <br /><br />(For some reason - blogspot wants me to be Anonymous -- this is Manicddaily at http://Manicddaily.wordpress.com.) Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2603588489333151910.post-74870686632285627262013-05-12T00:00:10.057-07:002013-05-12T00:00:10.057-07:00Yes the problem of temptations that's not mutu...Yes the problem of temptations that's not mutual.. and even worse if there's a third party involved. <br /><br />Humans tempt for all kind of reasons. I like this writing a lot (and the temptation is so well written)brudberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12563403553536472377noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2603588489333151910.post-88871161093690243562013-05-11T22:10:39.560-07:002013-05-11T22:10:39.560-07:00ugh...this is tough..when one loves to the point o...ugh...this is tough..when one loves to the point of addiction and the other just wants to fill their need and you know and just not strong enough to say no and regret in daylight..ugh..tight and emotional write andreaClaudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03011763027311966186noreply@blogger.com