tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2603588489333151910.post7879032227366566681..comments2023-03-30T05:13:08.008-07:00Comments on Lines on a page...: A Ride Cut Shortaka_andreahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15388010898688586760noreply@blogger.comBlogger27125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2603588489333151910.post-46242059417594856862013-08-24T02:17:55.578-07:002013-08-24T02:17:55.578-07:00Strong writing, Andrea. Punctuating the story with...Strong writing, Andrea. Punctuating the story with the pictures added to the tension - nicely done.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2603588489333151910.post-78874035449868205402013-08-23T09:24:51.137-07:002013-08-23T09:24:51.137-07:00...ah, i hate it when my happiness are being inter......ah, i hate it when my happiness are being interrupted... but then safety is the top most priority before every enjoyment... loved this Andrea... smiles... & oh, never tried a ferris wheel before... yay... kelvin s.m.https://www.blogger.com/profile/02591849636814413110noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2603588489333151910.post-88214807796331404802013-08-23T08:24:56.420-07:002013-08-23T08:24:56.420-07:00Like this ominous ride!Like this ominous ride!Mademoiselle Modellehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15451207941086886046noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2603588489333151910.post-20484326951496930962013-08-23T04:13:07.377-07:002013-08-23T04:13:07.377-07:00A thundering ride!A thundering ride!TCPChttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01735466017293465064noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2603588489333151910.post-76069524550664874452013-08-23T02:56:56.061-07:002013-08-23T02:56:56.061-07:00O! Such a short life! Such a dangerous ride.O! Such a short life! Such a dangerous ride.Susanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05723639294340760325noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2603588489333151910.post-42639162439176700082013-08-22T22:59:15.219-07:002013-08-22T22:59:15.219-07:00How spectacular the view for your final ride thoug...How spectacular the view for your final ride though? Really enjoyed your 55 and the 'chill factor'Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2603588489333151910.post-34136016401150694772013-08-22T20:32:29.500-07:002013-08-22T20:32:29.500-07:00Love that you illustrated your story. I surely wou...Love that you illustrated your story. I surely would not want to be on a large metal wheel in the middle of a thunderstorm! Nicely captured.Ginny Brannanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15298060016652737538noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2603588489333151910.post-14385769947599164822013-08-22T17:26:28.929-07:002013-08-22T17:26:28.929-07:00You have just put words to one of my worst fears.....You have just put words to one of my worst fears... getting killed when riding the ferris wheel. Yes, I truly, truly am terrified of even a single .. (once I rode a double and I panicked when at the top) So to me, these 55 words are horrifying. Margarethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00007201357693227614noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2603588489333151910.post-10419980522454735002013-08-22T16:14:08.496-07:002013-08-22T16:14:08.496-07:00I am scared with that ending, very chilling ~ Yi...I am scared with that ending, very chilling ~ Yikes on those thunderstorms ~ Good one ~Scarlethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03330793338813508704noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2603588489333151910.post-18097773259653093892013-08-22T15:41:13.764-07:002013-08-22T15:41:13.764-07:00Your choice of pictures---SUPERLATIVE---Your chose...Your choice of pictures---SUPERLATIVE---Your chosen words excellent. I've been there & it scared the #^%*+% outta me.<br /><br />Big Ron Fhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04569564474859788819noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2603588489333151910.post-54704614045472736442013-08-22T15:31:11.725-07:002013-08-22T15:31:11.725-07:00..familiar scene as our weather turns in August........familiar scene as our weather turns in August...I like your short story of a ferris wheel and a storm...a lot like life, huh?Kathy Reedhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12326495504453579091noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2603588489333151910.post-9253868728378706452013-08-22T15:30:17.498-07:002013-08-22T15:30:17.498-07:00I heard the caravel music playingI heard the caravel music playingWolfsrosebudhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17295258422523621134noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2603588489333151910.post-20764598476558220162013-08-22T15:29:38.303-07:002013-08-22T15:29:38.303-07:00Really well written. I'm not sure I'd hand...Really well written. I'm not sure I'd handle that...long-standing fear of heights!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2603588489333151910.post-78700544166783983302013-08-22T15:29:24.896-07:002013-08-22T15:29:24.896-07:00Very fun and expressive.Very fun and expressive.Buddah Moskowitzhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06839068145732552328noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2603588489333151910.post-74676099681615782652013-08-22T14:26:06.689-07:002013-08-22T14:26:06.689-07:00Impressive rendering of a frightening experience!Impressive rendering of a frightening experience!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2603588489333151910.post-73529700550993196702013-08-22T14:08:27.217-07:002013-08-22T14:08:27.217-07:00Oh, and they can only move so fast to get everyone...Oh, and they can only move so fast to get everyone off. That would be suspenseful at the top, waiting for your turn. Nice, Andrea.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09450346739275578678noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2603588489333151910.post-51339913290550926062013-08-22T13:33:00.499-07:002013-08-22T13:33:00.499-07:00Successful atmosphere--Your background and photos ...Successful atmosphere--Your background and photos energize your words and heighten the inherent fear factor associated with lightning and heights. Nice.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2603588489333151910.post-54274501075697610322013-08-22T13:31:10.203-07:002013-08-22T13:31:10.203-07:00Ooh... I bet that was scary.Ooh... I bet that was scary.Laurie Kolphttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07494759781947881343noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2603588489333151910.post-88907809483910960142013-08-22T13:22:20.930-07:002013-08-22T13:22:20.930-07:00Love where you went with this.Love where you went with this.Kathryn Dychehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17175563748388497142noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2603588489333151910.post-32549623065122334312013-08-22T13:19:48.896-07:002013-08-22T13:19:48.896-07:00Great movement in the piece - taking the ride, see...Great movement in the piece - taking the ride, seeing the color, feeling the thrill and the noise and then STOP! Wow! Good work!Beachannyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08638256396472533685noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2603588489333151910.post-55615132915715503612013-08-22T13:16:16.686-07:002013-08-22T13:16:16.686-07:00This was quite a ride you took us in... scary inde...This was quite a ride you took us in... scary indeed.brudberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12563403553536472377noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2603588489333151910.post-86927384962600997972013-08-22T13:10:39.815-07:002013-08-22T13:10:39.815-07:00eep...hopefully they got off before it struck...or...eep...hopefully they got off before it struck...or the larger ride might be over....surely those things are grounded right?Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2603588489333151910.post-23412878306382344592013-08-22T12:43:06.235-07:002013-08-22T12:43:06.235-07:00That is an adventurous ride. I love Ferris wheel.
...That is an adventurous ride. I love Ferris wheel.<br />Interesting write.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2603588489333151910.post-62796023308569099832013-08-22T12:15:01.730-07:002013-08-22T12:15:01.730-07:00that is where it was Mary~that is where it was Mary~aka_andreahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15388010898688586760noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2603588489333151910.post-28232422452668611102013-08-22T12:13:19.522-07:002013-08-22T12:13:19.522-07:00Well, I definitely would not want to be on a ferri...Well, I definitely would not want to be on a ferris wheel in a lightning storm!! I have been on that gigantic ferris wheel at Navy Pier, if that is the one you are talking of.Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.com