tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2603588489333151910.post7414110883939688600..comments2023-03-30T05:13:08.008-07:00Comments on Lines on a page...: i love you...a tragedyaka_andreahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15388010898688586760noreply@blogger.comBlogger10125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2603588489333151910.post-7048908019810235232013-04-05T08:17:36.068-07:002013-04-05T08:17:36.068-07:00I really relate to this piece, I spend so much of ...I really relate to this piece, I spend so much of the time lost in my own world unable to pry myself free, unable to connect with or even interact with those on the outside (not for lack of desire I have to fight like hell to be present). I have many times been unable to recognize people that I know. I used to ace my tests this way I wouldn't even remember taking them and sometimes it would be a subject for which I have a significant disability like math. According to my husband I sometimes literally see through people if someone is completely blocking a sign I will still read it and he will be like there is someone standing in front of it how could you possibly see it and I will be like what person? Apparently I have very selective vision, I am a space case on a whole other level. Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2603588489333151910.post-88292574582904958892013-04-05T02:40:57.155-07:002013-04-05T02:40:57.155-07:00Too often true. I like the way you did this. Reall...Too often true. I like the way you did this. Really brings the message home.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2603588489333151910.post-50171625690534901632013-04-04T20:21:27.014-07:002013-04-04T20:21:27.014-07:00What a creative presentation. I especially like &q...What a creative presentation. I especially like "I dream about everything that I am too afraid to try" and the last line.✿https://www.blogger.com/profile/01044032159371976375noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2603588489333151910.post-36653379104820354762013-04-04T15:47:50.767-07:002013-04-04T15:47:50.767-07:00Whew, that really packs an ironic punch!Whew, that really packs an ironic punch!Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2603588489333151910.post-87654786706912140272013-04-04T15:27:44.896-07:002013-04-04T15:27:44.896-07:00ha. who are you...can i love you be the answer alw...ha. who are you...can i love you be the answer always? does it help us to overcome what we are...and is love so hard to accept? some thoughts that rambled out after reading...nice structure as well to convey the conversation.Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2603588489333151910.post-42018128561868053242013-04-04T15:08:07.795-07:002013-04-04T15:08:07.795-07:00A creative piece of tragic miscommunication ~ Lik...A creative piece of tragic miscommunication ~ Like that ending line, a twist on the words ~Gracehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02213172239590722747noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2603588489333151910.post-62381139648543661292013-04-04T14:15:47.452-07:002013-04-04T14:15:47.452-07:00That final line was such a surprise. I read it not...That final line was such a surprise. I read it not so much as disconnect as the voice of one person putting themselves down and the other expressing unconditional love. Good poetic irony.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2603588489333151910.post-37169617973999429022013-04-04T13:56:16.464-07:002013-04-04T13:56:16.464-07:00We're so wrapped up in ourselves, aren't w...We're so wrapped up in ourselves, aren't we? Depending on your beliefs, this is such a perfect exposition of the human condition and our relationship with our Creator. Alternatively, why is neither one of these people listening?Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2603588489333151910.post-26149684301530750222013-04-04T13:28:38.093-07:002013-04-04T13:28:38.093-07:00So very sad. How common, I wonder, is this intense...So very sad. How common, I wonder, is this intense disconnect?<br />I know I have experienced it. <br />Sometimes we simply canot communicate on the same frequency.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12460881702249079009noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2603588489333151910.post-83916122041493306492013-04-04T13:21:15.854-07:002013-04-04T13:21:15.854-07:00ugh...a tragedy indeed if it's just words and ...ugh...a tragedy indeed if it's just words and not listening to the other or trying to see them...a sad irony..Claudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03011763027311966186noreply@blogger.com